Nat// Thank you, Nat! I really appreciate it. Please keep correcting me. I reflected your feedback.

Since you solicited some feedback to help your English, point #1 is usually stated, “practice makes perfect” . “I won’t be able to use a perfect grammar ” should be “I won’t be able to use perfect grammar” (without the a). Also do you mean to say in 3. it will serve as study notes? (plural?). “about service design and service sciences domain.” could be “about service design and the service sciences domain” (with a the). For “It is expected to give me an opportunity to be familiar with expressing thoughts in English. ” you can say, “I hope it gives me an opportunity to become more familiar with expressing thoughts in English.” Nice, keep it up! Best, nat

and congratulations to us, who want to know more about your thoughts on service design